Book Report#6

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     Hello everyone! In this book report#6 I chose a book which the title is Tildy's Moment, by O. Henry. This book is on A2 elementary level and had 831 count of words, and 4 pages. Hope you enjoyed it! 

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     This book was tell about the main character named Tildy that was fat and also not beauty. She worked at the restaurant with her beautiful friend named Aileen, she was felt envy with her beautiful friend, because Aileen had many man that very interested with Aileen's beauty, while Tildy's not. Someday in that restaurant there was a drunk man, he was sat on Tildy's table and he was drunk beer to much. When the man finished his drunk, she got up and suddenly he kissed Tildy, then he go out. Because that, Tildy was very shock, she didn't expect there's a man who want to kissed her, she was felt very happy, she think that this man was loved her, then Tildy was tell to all her friend in that restaurant about that man. 


Someday in Bogle's Family Restaurant on Eight Avenue, there were two waitresses, one with beautiful face named Aileen and the one which is not beauty, named Tildy.

Most people who came to ate at Bogle's Restaurant were man, because they loved Aileen. They also gave her a gold ring, a little dog, or just wanted to take Aileen danced. But Tildy, nobody were saw her. One day, there was a young man came to the restaurant, he was sat at Tildy's table, he was drunk to much beer. When he finished drunk, he got up and kissed Tildy, then he walked out of the restaurant. 

Tildy was shock about that, she though that the young man was loved her. She didn't expected there's a man who want to kissed her. After that, Tildy was told all of her friends in restaurant about the man who was kissed her.

This story can gave a lessons for us, that is don't be an overexertion people. So, are you interested with this story? Do you want to know how was the ending of this story? What happened after Tildy got a kissed from the drunk man? Did the man was trully loved Tildy? 


Comments

  1. Anne KurniawatiDecember 6, 2020 at 5:38 AM

    Hi Dewi,
    First thing is about language. You have many language errors. You need to check the subject and verb agreement. Also be careful with a passive and active form.
    Second, your blurb still looks like a summary. Nice try though.

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