Extensive Reading Project#4
Dewi Kencana
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Hello Everyone! In these project#4 I was chose a book that the title was The Boy Who Couldn't Sleep by Foreman Peter. This book had 3044 count of words. The genre of this book was a short story. And this is the link to access that book : https://english-e-reader.net/book/the-boy-who-couldnt-sleep-foreman-peter
These book was told about the main character of these story, named Max who couldn't sleep in his life. Max had these rare disease from he was a baby. Max's condition was like same with the other people, he looked normal, and he doesn't looked sick. He was smart boy, cheerful, and he always wanted to knew more and more about anything in the world. Max's disease doesn't had the medicine to healed that. One day, his mother try to give him a sleep drugs but it just worked for a while, after Max woke up, he was felt angry because he knew that he was slept. Max doesn't like slept because he though that if he slept, he will lost many things in the world. When Max grew older, his face was looked like an old man, not looked like the other people who had the same age with him, it was because the characteristic of these disease, and the doctor said that Max wouldn't had a long life. Max grew up in a quiet place, because he needed that until one day he was died before his aged was 40.
This is the youtibe link to access my video as Mrs. Samantha, who was a mother from the boy who couldn't sleep : https://youtu.be/_GU35N79eYg
My experience when make this project is I felt happy because I can doing this project well, even in my video was not perfectly done and there are still had some mistake. I made this project with my partner too. From this project I can realised how to became a interviewer and I felt that I'm in the real talkshow. I also can realised to became famous people who was invited in the talkshow.
Hi Dewi,
ReplyDeleteI could see that you put a lot of effort for this project.
First thing that you need to improve is the language, both grammar and pronunciation.
You need to be careful with the auxiliary verbs you use in your sentences, active and passive sentences.
In the video you are trying to play with the tone and intonation. However, it becomes more like as if you are reading a poem rather than acting as the mother. You need to be careful here.
Overall, it's a good work Dewi.