Blog Report
1. Moving On
My name is Mike from "Moving On" that created by Lauren. When I was seventeen years old I got my first break up with the girl that I dated for four years. I was break up with her because at that time I was going off to college on the other ride of my country. It was the hardest thing I had at my seventeen years, I must leave the girl that I loved. Now almost two years after I break up, I felt completely whole. Then I met Maria and I hope for what the future might bring.
I like this story because based on this story we can know that forgetting someone that we love will take quite a long time, and it's not easy. Based on this story too I also like about the main character because he was a good boy. After he had a break up, he didn't hurry to find a new girl, instead he was continued to study hard for his college.
After I read this story I can enjoy to read this story very well because it is easy to understand. I hope the other readers of this story can also understand this story and can take a lessons from this story.
2. The Argument
My name is Lulu. Based on the story "The Argument" created by rong-chang. This wednesday was going my busy day. My boyfriend ask me to join him to go to the play. But we had an argument about it because I don't like musicals and I can never understand what they're saying when they sing, and the music is not good, either. Then finally he agree with me. After that I suggested to go to a movie right now. But, again, we have an argument because my boyfriend wasn't go to a movie. And then I raged on, of how he had absolutely no respect of me, I am feel so tired about this. So before I hanging up I said "We're through!".
Based on the story "The Argument" I don't like the characters in the story because the characters in that story can't solve their problem properly and they shouldn't need to argue because of a small problem. But, I like this story because I can learn from this story to not get angry easily when facing problems and don't end a relationship quickly.
After I read this story, I hope the other readers of this story can also enjoy this and can take the lesson. When we are in a relationship, we will often experience differences of opinion with our partner, but it is not a big problem. When we face it, we should be able to face it with a cool mind and don't make a decisions whem we're angry.
Hi Dewi, it seems that you don't really understand the guidelines.
ReplyDeleteThe first paragraph of both reports are okay, but the next paragraphs are not.
You actually need to tell part of the story that you like / dislike from the character's point of view. You can use "I" here as if you were the character of the story and telling what you liked or disliked from his/her point of view.
And what you wish to be different is also from the view of that character. This is not about what you wish the readers will take from the story.